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Is this story good?

i'm a terrible speller, get over it. not to mention its only a rough draft..... but thank you for reading

Public Comments

1. you spelled the first word wrong.
2. ahh this brings back memories of when i use to write stories... lol, now, this is a good one, and you should keep writing!!
3. Actually i need to ask you something. How the hell did you work up enough motivation to write that much!!
4. listen don't ask this on a computer ask a friend or family member to read it because i don't think anyone wouls want to read this sorry it is probally good but i am sorry i am not reading it.
5. It's hard to take your story seriously when it has spelling and grammar mistakes. At the very least they are a distraction. If you don't care enough to make sure words are spelled correctly, why should we care enough to want to read it? Not trying to be rude, just offering constructive criticism.
6. aww i love it.i used to write stories when i was like 12.but i love it!!!!!!!!! keep writing
7. This is really good!!!You're lucky.I have writers' block.You probably don't.Anyways,keep writing.It's REALLY good.
8. thats really good. im writing a story to but its like 120 pages long so i wouldnt put it on here, thats good you though you should keep writing. and dont worry you can fix the spelling mistakes after obviously, its just a first draft
9. You definitely have talent. Great work. Stay with it. :)
10. I have to agree with Modest. I think you should have someone that you know in person to proofread it (who is at least out of High School). It's the kind of stuff I read, and I liked it, I read the whole thing. You should keep going. I would like to ask you to forward whatever else you write to my yahoo e-mail :)
11. no!
12. I thought the story was very good. It started off strong too and grabbed my attention. There is, of course, the occasional grammar or spelling error. These made the story hard to follow at times. It will take some revising to make it perfect, but dang for a 14 year old you really do know how to write. Very impressed. Hat-tip!